What do you guys think of this story?

I think it sounds interesting! Something I would probably enjoy reading! Just a suggestion (from someone who reads like theres no tomarrow) make sure there is atleast a LITTLE romantic interest. because I definatly enjoy reading adventure books and fantasy and all that because they don't have lots of romance. Like percy jackson books. BUT it had a little. Just enough to keep you thinking about that in the back of your mind and it was something you wondered throuought the whole series but it didn't get in the way of the real story. It's just some advice. Because like I said, I like books that focus more on adventure and stuff like that but havin a little romance keeps it interesting. :)